Entry 57 - Final Video / Critique 3

I'm very happy with how this video turned out. It's been something I've wanted to do for a long time, and to be able to finally do it was fun. For the final critique though, I'll have to fix a few things:

1. Certain Keying needs to be fixed. The screen shows up sometimes when it shouldn't.
2. I need to redo the audio. I think better rehearsing would help this.
3. Drone seems to have the issue of being parially see through. I need to fix that.
4. The pictures I promised to put up weren't there. I need to refilm that scene with the pictures.

If I fix these things, my video should be good for the final critique.